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It all started on a night, night and murderer Jeffrey Woods completely freaked her parents and her beloved brother Liu Woods; Jeff stopped being the boy who was and became a soulless monster and pure desire to kill. But Seriously he died his brother Liu after receiving multiple cuts and stab wounds?

No, survived the attack on my brother, barely as a vile worm, to bleed every inch that ran, I felt like bursting my heart for the effort, but continued with the strength of my desperation to live, go to Jeff, then everything went black and I fainted.

Take long for him to wake up, was in a fairly lit room, full of tubes and medicine, just felt my body could not speak, could not eat, I fed through a tube, breathing through an artificial lung, I could barely make out who I was; just listen to a nurse talking to a doctor, this said "This patient may not survive, needs many transplants, his left lung collapsed, his heart is very delicate and kidneys are failing, it is almost impossible to survive." Those words I They took all hope of surviving what had happened.

Came the day when I would transplants needed, and as he could not talk yet and was quite sedated, I could not express my joy at that time, so save it for when I recovered. The nurse said "Hi, I'm Susan, I wish you the best of luck, you're very strong, barely survived to this attempted murder, I personally wanted to take care of you, because I admire your strength, I wish you when you leave hospital ever get out. "Kiss my cheek and blushed, he could not deny it was a very beautiful girl, but did not know if I would live this.

It's time, time which would decide whether he would live or die. The doctor told me that as a young strong and survived long time, was likely to survive, I put the mask and slept, but, why even felt what they did to me? At that moment, I felt like a cold blade that pierced me to the side of the heart, the first cut was the most painful, then something opened my skin, the pain was more intense with each passing second, each cut was more painful than above, but, most painful was when I started cutting my heart and get it out of my body, that moment was just the beginning of my torture, hours of excruciating pain, every cut, every part of me that replaced, each suture, all the pain through my body destroyed what little sanity I had left, until it shattered.

They spent days in that bed unable to move, unable to speak, just listening to the voice of this nurse, Susan, was with me, day and night, talking to me, telling me to resist, he wanted me alive, I wanted to know truth and hoped talk to me and hear my voice. A week passed and she came more often, came and I sang, I read, but one day before being able to move my body said "I want you to wake up." He kissed me to finish that sentence and I started to feel my body, manages to open my eyes and saw him, cried with joy to see me wake up, I said, "Hi Susan, I'm Liu Woods." She was astonished, said, "Really you ... brother Jeff Woods? He was here a while, I am very ill, I found out I went crazy and killed his family, How is it that survived Liu? I also found out that three days ago kidnapped a girl and burned her alive with bleach and gasoline, then escaped from there and has not been seen, but in the house, or what remains of it, not found more than two bodies, say that she survived but did not know what happened to the body's brother Jeff, some said it took him but, in the room where slept his brother, or where you were sleeping, they found written blood on the wall "go to sleep" and the letter bath "smile" in the mirror, I very much regret the death of your parents, seriously, and as not think you want to return to that place, "You want to sleep over in my house for a while? Well, when you get out of recovery, I live alone since my parents died in a car accident, so spare me a room. "

It accepts the offer of Susan, said "When I leave here, I want to take you to dinner, wherever you want, alone, I need one day to accompany me to my old home to find my clothes, but I do not think it is still there." Accepted with a little scary. The following day she visited me every day, laughed together, we were very close, almost like we were dating, so I asked her to be my girlfriend, she said "If Liu, want to be your girlfriend, I was going to ask but did not know how. "He approached me and we kissed. I was so happy, things were fixing to me, was a person who would be my new family.

I left the hospital, it was my first day out there, Susan welcomed me with open arms, as it was day, I told him we were for my clothes to my new home, said "Yes, but you have to wear something to protect us in case your brother is still hanging around. "I replied" Okay, a couple of butcher knives, a syringe, a little soothing, also a little emergency kit in case we need suturing, you or me, if a glass can cause a wound that needs stitches, a gallon of water and two glasses, for if you give us thirsty. "

We went to his house and picked everything you need, plus a bag to carry my stuff. Back in my old home, he gripped my arm, I said "Do not be afraid, everything will be fine." I kissed her to calm down, I opened the door a kick, was closed, we walked in and saw that the walls of my house were full of blood, the blood of my parents, we find in the kitchen a gallon of gasoline, an empty bleach and some matches flask, still touring the house, we saw the bathroom that was with the door open and saw the mirror with the word " Smile "written in blood, the sink and the floor covered in blood, my whole house was just full of blood, in the end, we walked next door was the fourth of my parents and found the sheets stained with blood, my whole house was like, full of blood, in the end, we enter the most disturbing place of my house: My room. The phrase "go to sleep" was written in blood on the wall, as Susan said. I looked in my closet my belongings, my laptop, my mp3, my phone and my clothes, only what was not full of blood, when you turn to see my room, I remembered the disturbing side of Jeff seeing me with those eyes full of madness holding a bloody knife in his hand saying "Shh, just go to sleep." That memory was what term to break what little sanity I had left, I told Susan to give me the backpack where we had things, I went to the bathroom, take the knife and said "Jeff ... I'll see you in hell damn when the two have died."

After the sentence, speaks to Susan, kissed her, I said "Goodbye my love, but want to see Jeff to get back at what made me, revenge for killed my parents and almost kills me, I love you Susan, but you do not see pus after I die, I'm sorry this. "The would stab, but, no, I did not, I would not become Jeff, Susan begged her to forgive me, to come to my old home I had affected, he said "Okay, Liu, I love you, and I know that being so close to death can affect, let's go home." I kiss, ordered a taxi and went home, I went to bathe.

While I bathed, I remembered every moment spent with my family, Mom, Dad, my childhood with Jeff, the pranks we did, everything we had together, the joy of having my family around, I began to mourn, but The sound of falling water drowned my sobs, so it did not matter. The first night was somewhat traumatic for me. In my nightmares I could see Jeff as it was before the accident being brutally murdered by the new Jeff, then I turned to look and say "Liu, why you went to not sleep as I asked you?" I woke up with a terrible fright Susan faith ran to my room, I said, "What happened Liu? Are you okay? "I replied" Yes ... it was just a nightmare, do not worry. "

The next day, upon awakening, I felt a scent that has long not enjoyed, it was the smell of hot-cakes freshly made, I went to the dining room and there was Susan, preparing breakfast, as Mom did, gave me good morning , sat down and started eating, how long had it been since he did not eat hot-cakes made with love ?, I do not know, but the taste ... it was so nice, I felt loved again, but happiness does not last long, I was going crazy, every passing day, Susan reminded me more Mom, so take a kitchen knife, ran to his room, he was ready to go out with me on a date, she looked so beautiful, I was not able to kill, not, not without knowing much he loved her, not without feeling love for the last time in his life ... I loved her, but I was getting crazier every time, every time it cost me more to live no stick a knife in the heart, could not be so, I did not want to kill her, but had no choice, or so I thought.

Already leaving the theater, walked home, he said "I love you Susan, but there's something inside me that I ... killing me and I do not know if support more so, I want you to know that I will love you no matter what happens. "After the phrase, malviviente out of an alley and took the bag Susan, the wounded, I was angry, I wanted to kill him for hurting Susan, chased him with the knife he had saved on my jacket, I dragged him into the alley where he stole the bag from my beloved, in front of her so I made her apologize, wanted to take his life, but before I said to Susan, "Run, do not want you to see this, I love you Susan, and do not want to see this." He ran as far as he could, when I knew it was time, I told the guy "not forgive you for hurting Susan, she is so good, so pure, hurt is a very serious crime, why, I'll take your life, and only then you will pay for hurting her. "

Raise my knife and started stabbing him repeatedly, he could only see suffering in the eyes of the man, but still kept stabbing him until he died of multiple stab wounds, wipe the blood of mu leather jacket, which was a bit stained, luckily only had spotted, so it was easy to hide the fact that corned the thief, I left the alley and met Susan in the corner cafe taking a good strong espresso.

She was fine, the manager had bandaged his wound, thanked him, Susan carried home carefully, take her to his room and lay down on his bed, I said "Susan, do not want this to happen to you, but I I've noticed one thing, would not let anyone hurt you, starting today, you'll never be afraid, nobody will hurt, I swear. "I kissed her and went to take a shower, I realized I could not kill her, she was all he had in the world, was the only person he loved, but he enjoyed killing that guy's dead, but he could not kill anyone, I decided to just kill people hurt to the innocent people who did evil people that I minded, and above all, he would kill anyone who tried to hurt Susan.

Days passed, more and killed more people, but it was annoying having pants full of blood, so buy a leather pants then killing was less annoying, jacket and trousers, both leather, which I could easily cleaned with white gasoline he had bought to time.

Kill an increasingly boring habit again, kill with simple stabbing was very repetitive, so I was using modes more twisted each time, some burned them alive with gasoline, others operated without anesthesia, others were forced to eat his own guts, others cut into pieces and threw them stray dogs, but never killed any innocent criminals and thugs killed only does that to me a hero, right? Stop making criminals suffer the most horrible ways, every day used most horrible forms and twisted to kill, came home, cleaned my clothes in the blood of criminals and spent quality time with Susan, until one day, the invite to dinner, as I had a job as a cook in a restaurant, earning well, but took her to a beautiful place, in the light of the candles, I said "Susan, we've been almost a year together, you're the love of my life, do not know how I could live without you, I want to propose something. "I knelt down and remove a ring from my bag" Will you marry me? "He moved, and with tears in his eyes said" If Liu, I want to marry you. "We left the restaurant, I had not been so happy in my life, but a damn arrived with a gun and shot him.

I was filled with anger and hatred, but he could not leave Susan alone there, bleeding, dying, ran and get to the nearest hospital, the doctors told me "This very delicate, perhaps not wake up, expect the worst." I went to get the damn who shot him, never forget your face, I spent hours walking the streets until I found it, hit him nearly senseless, and said, "Will you give me your life bastard, because of you my Susan is the brink of death, and will pay with your life. "He died when I finished the sentence.

I arrived at the hospital, the doctor said that Susan had awakened, to go talk to her, and I did. Now Susan's room, saw me and said "Liu? Is that you? I'm glad you came, I hope to resist and you did it resist what happened to you, I love you Liu, I do not want to die, but if I do not want you to kill yourself, I love you too much to die for me, I I know what you did, I know you kill criminals, and although not a very noble, mission you have is, do not stop doing what you do Liu. "

He spent an hour in which we talked, in which I said all he had to say, did not want to lose it, do not want to lose the only person left me in this world. The doctor came in and said "We need to operate Mr. Woods will recover." She was taken to the operating room, were three hours that seemed eternal, I wanted to gouge my eyes out of despair, but hope that Susan survived was what I still standing. Term operation, the doctor who took care of everything said "The operation was a success, she is stable, morning wake and two weeks may leave the hospital." Those words touched me so much, I felt so calm knowing that Susan would be fine.

I was in his room all day waiting for him to wake, woke up and said "Who are you and where my parents are?" Those words filled me with sadness, Susan had forgotten me, but I had to do to remind me when recovered, take her to hospital where we met said "Is that you, Liu? As've changed. "She began to remember, take it to my old house, and remembered what we were there, I kept taking it to all significant places for us during the week, until we got to the restaurant that I proposed, she remembered everything, hugged me and said "Liu, now I remember everything, thanks for being with me until he regained me." And I said, "You did the same for me, I owe much Susan." I kissed her, but when we parted, he began to convulse, scared me a lot and take her to hospital, back in the hospital, not hate go on, but I loved her.

Do not leave her alone when she needed me, I stayed there waiting for news from the doctor, and he said "I'm sorry sir, but his girlfriend is dead." That phrase filled me with sadness and hatred, take the doctor and neck Trone because there was no reason to hold back, I started to kill everyone in the hospital, men, women, children and sick, I killed them all, he could not bear them to live and my Susan no, she could not die and would not let that happened, but it was inevitable, my clothes were full of blood of innocents, my hands were full of blood and my eyes had changed, so I decided to do something, I went for a knife and started cutting a heart in my chest, the initials of Susan and her time of death, our anniversary and the date when we met, then went for a needle and thread and I sewed the edges of my lips into a smile for anyone to see and suffer inside When I finished, I went home, grabbed my leather clothes and things that used to kill, and left there, never to return, now, I live by killing all those who are happy, but when I die, not will see it, but kill consoles me, if you see me, run and do not show your happiness, or die in a very ruthless and twisted way, you can not tell your body what it was like before meeting me, Homicidal Liu survivor Jeff The Killer.
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On a hot summer night around 4:33 in the morning, as Jeff the Killer took another victim—this time, a young wife, and also leaving her husband with a massive skull fracture as a result of blunt-force trauma, the only one to survive was the couple's 4-month-old baby that police have discovered crying in its crib. Along side the child, police have found a letter which was written on the back of a paper grocery bag in a black sharpie marker, and a Motorola Droid, faintly illuminated under the baby's blanket. The babysitter who was locked in the closet during the time claimed she smelled the lingering odor of women's cheap perfume and found body glitter on the baby's crib. But who was it from? Police were able to decipher the writing on the grocery bag and here's what it said:

Jeff,

if you are reading this, know that no matter how many innocent victims you claim or how much innocent blood you shed, I'm still coming for you in the end. All of the men and women you so viciously slaughtered and disemboweled, I beat you to it. I killed them not because I hate them, I imagined those victims were you as I took their lives. It was the mere vision of you that made me kill them. I never did like you, you greasy-headed, grinning, smug, ignorant son of a bitch. My black eyes may look like I'm void of vision, but I'm not stupid. Just remember, the night that you creep into a poor girl's bedroom, you're gonna fall head over heals down the fucking stairs with your guts caught on the broken glass of the window that I smashed you into. Tonight, when I reach you, evil will battle evil, winner kills all, and the only one who will not get out alive is you. I'm coming for you. Sleep well...

Signed,
Jane the Killer
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Excerpt from a local Newspaper:

OMINOUS UNKNOWN
KILLER IS STILL
AT LARGE.

After weeks of unexplained murders, the ominous unknown killer is still on the rise. After little evidence has been found, a young boy states that he survived one of the killer's attacks and bravely tells his story.

"I had a bad dream and I woke up in the middle of the night," says the boy, "I saw that for some reason the window was open, even though I remember it being closed before I went to bed. I got up and shut it once more. Afterwards, I simply crawled under my covers and tried to get back to sleep. That's when I had a strange feeling, like someone was watching me. I looked up, and nearly jumped out of my bed. There, in the little ray of light, illuminating from between my curtains, were a pair of two eyes. These weren't regular eyes; they were dark, ominous eyes. They were bordered in black and... just plain out terrified me. That's when I saw his mouth. A long, horrendous smile that made every hair on my body stand up. The figure stood there, watching me. Finally, after what seemed like forever, he said it. A simple phrase, but said in a way only a mad man could speak.

"He said, 'Go To Sleep.' I let out a scream, that's what sent him at me. He pulled up a knife; aiming at my heart. He jumped on top of my bed. I fought him back; I kicked, I punched, I rolled around, trying to knock him off me. That's when my dad busted in. The man threw the knife, it went into my dad's shoulder. The man probably would've finished him off, if one of the neighbors hadn't alerted the police.

"They drove into the parking lot, and ran towards the door. The man turned and ran down the hallway. I heard a smash, like glass breaking. As I came out of my room, I saw the window that was pointing towards the back of my house was broken. I looked out it to see him vanish into the distance. I can tell you one thing, I will never forget that face. Those cold, evil eyes, and that psychotic smile. They will never leave my head."

Police are still on the look for this man. If you see anyone that fits the description in this story, please contact your local police department.

Jeff and his family had just moved into a new neighborhood. His dad had gotten a promotion at work, and they thought it would be best to live in one of those "fancy" neighborhoods. Jeff and his brother Liu couldn't complain though. A new, better house. What was not to love? As they were getting unpacked, one of their neighbors came by.

"Hello," she said, "I'm Barbara; I live across the street from you. Well, I just wanted to introduce my self and to introduce my son." She turns around and calls her son over. "Billy, these are our new neighbors." Billy said hi and ran back to play in his yard.

"Well," said Jeff's mom, "I'm Margaret, and this is my husband Peter, and my two sons, Jeff and Liu." They each introduced themselves, and then Barbara invited them to her son's birthday. Jeff and his brother were about to object, when their mother said that they would love to. When Jeff and his family are done packing, Jeff went up to his mom.

"Mom, why would you invite us to some kid's party? If you haven't noticed, I'm not some dumb kid."

"Jeff," said his mother, "We just moved here; we should show that we want to spend time with our neighbors. Now, we're going to that party, and that's final." Jeff started to talk, but stopped himself, knowing that he couldn't do anything. Whenever his mom said something, it was final. He walked up to his room and plopped down on his bed. He sat there looking at his ceiling when suddenly, he got a weird feeling. Not so much a pain, but... a weird feeling. He dismissed it as just some random feeling. He heard his mother call him down to get his stuff, and he walked down to get it.

The next day, Jeff walked down stairs to get breakfast and got ready for school. As he sat there, eating his breakfast, he once again got that feeling. This time it was stronger. It gave him a slight tugging pain, but he once again dismissed it. As he and Liu finished breakfast, they walked down to the bus stop. They sat there waiting for the bus, and then, all of a sudden, some kid on a skateboard jumped over them, only inches above their laps. They both jumped back in surprise. "Hey, what the hell?"

The kid landed and turned back to them. He kicked his skate board up and caught it with his hands. The kid seems to be about twelve; one year younger than Jeff. He wears a Aeropostale shirt and ripped blue jeans.

"Well, well, well. It looks like we got some new meat." Suddenly, two other kids appeared. One was super skinny and the other was huge. "Well, since you're new here, I'd like to introduce ourselves, over there is Keith." Jeff and Liu looked over to the skinny kid. He had a dopey face that you would expect a sidekick to have. "And he's Troy." They looked over at the fat kid. Talk about a tub of lard. This kid looked like he hadn't exercised since he was crawling.

"And I," said the first kid, "am Randy. Now, for all the kids in this neighborhood there is a small price for bus fare, if you catch my drift." Liu stood up, ready to punch the lights out of the kid's eyes when one of his friends pulled a knife on him. "Tsk, tsk, tsk, I had hoped you would be more cooperative, but it seems we must do this the hard way." The kid walked up to Liu and took his wallet out of his pocket. Jeff got that feeling again. Now, it was truly strong; a burning sensation. He stood up, but Liu gestured him to sit down. Jeff ignored him and walked up to the kid.

"Listen here you little punk, give back my bro's wallet or else." Randy put the wallet in his pocket and pulled out his own knife.

"Oh? And what will you do?" Just as he finished the sentence, Jeff popped the kid in the nose. As Randy reached for his face, Jeff grabbed the kid's wrist and broke it. Randy screamed and Jeff grabbed the knife from his hand. Troy and Keith rushed Jeff, but Jeff was too quick. He threw Randy to the ground. Keith lashed out at him, but Jeff ducked and stabbed him in the arm. Keith dropped his knife and fell to the ground screaming. Troy rushed him too, but Jeff didn't even need the knife. He just punched Troy straight in the stomach and Troy went down. As he fell, he puked all over. Liu could do nothing but look in amazement at Jeff.

"Jeff how'd you?" that was all he said. They saw the bus coming and knew they'd be blamed for the whole thing. So they started running as fast as they could. As they ran, they looked back and saw the bus driver rushing over to Randy and the others. As Jeff and Liu made it to school, they didn't dare tell what happened. All they did was sit and listen. Liu just thought of that as his brother beating up a few kids, but Jeff knew it was more. It was something, scary. As he got that feeling he felt how powerful it was, the urge to just, hurt someone. He didn't like how it sounded, but he couldn't help feeling happy. He felt that strange feeling go away, and stay away for the entire day of school. Even as he walked home due to the whole thing near the bus stop, and how now he probably wouldn't be taking the bus anymore, he felt happy. When he got home his parents asked him how his day was, and he said, in a somewhat ominous voice, "It was a wonderful day." Next morning, he heard a knock at his front door. He walked down to find two police officers at the door, his mother looking back at him with an angry look.

"Jeff, these officers tell me that you attacked three kids. That it wasn't regular fighting, and that they were stabbed. Stabbed, son!" Jeff's gaze fell to the floor, showing his mother that it was true.

"Mom, they were the ones who pulled the knives on me and Liu."

"Son," said one of the cops," We found three kids, two stabbed, one having a bruise on his stomach, and we have witnesses proving that you fled the scene. Now, what does that tell us?" Jeff knew it was no use. He could say him and Liu had been attacked, but then there was no proof it was not them who attacked first. They couldn't say that they weren't fleeing, because truth be told they were. So Jeff couldn't defend himself or Liu.

"Son, call down your brother." Jeff couldn't do it, since it was him who beat up all the kids.

"Sir, it...it was me. I was the one who beat up the kids. Liu tried to hold me back, but he couldn't stop me." The cop looked at his partner and they both nod.

"Well kid, looks like a year in Juvy..."

"Wait!" says Liu. They all looked up to see him holding a knife. The officers pulled their guns and locked them on Liu.

"It was me, I beat up those little punks. Have the marks to prove it." He lifted up his sleeves to reveal cuts and bruises, as if he was in a struggle.

"Son, just put the knife down," said the officer. Liu held up the knife and dropped it to the ground. He put his hands up and walked over to the cops.

"No Liu, it was me! I did it!" Jeff had tears running down his face.

"Huh, poor bro. Trying to take the blame for what I did. Well, take me away." The police led Liu out to the patrol car.

"Liu, tell them it was me! Tell them! I was the one who beat up those kids!" Jeff's mother put her hands on his shoulders.

"Jeff please, you don't have to lie. We know it's Liu, you can stop." Jeff watched helplessly as the cop car speeds off with Liu inside. A few minutes later Jeff's dad pulled into the driveway, seeing Jeff's face and knowing something was wrong.

"Son, son what is it?" Jeff couldn't answer. His vocal cords were strained from crying. Instead, Jeff's mother walked his father inside to break the bad news to him as Jeff wept in the driveway. After an hour or so Jeff walked back in to the house, seeing that his parents were both shocked, sad, and disappointed. He couldn't look at them. He couldn't see how they thought of Liu when it was his fault. He just went to sleep, trying to get the whole thing off his mind. Two days went by, with no word from Liu at JDC. No friends to hang out with. Nothing but sadness and guilt. That is until Saturday, when Jeff is woke up by his mother, with a happy, sunshiny face.

"Jeff, it's the day." she said as she opened up the curtains and let light flood into his room.

"What, what's today?" asked Jeff as he stirs awake.

"Why, it's Billy's party." He was now fully awake.

"Mom, you're joking, right? You don't expect me to go to some kid's party after..." There was a long pause.

"Jeff, we both know what happened. I think this party could be the thing that brightens up the past days. Now, get dressed." Jeff's mother walked out of the room and downstairs to get ready herself. He fought himself to get up. He picked out a random shirt and pair of jeans and walked down stairs. He saw his mother and father all dressed up; his mother in a dress and his father in a suit. He thought, why they would ever wear such fancy clothes to a kid's party?

"Son, is that all your going to wear?" said Jeff's mom.

"Better than wearing too much." he said. His mother pushed down the feeling to yell at him and hid it with a smile.

"Now Jeff, we may be over-dressed, but this is how you go if you want to make an impression." said his father. Jeff grunted and went back up to his room.

"I don't have any fancy clothes!" he yelled down stairs.

"Just pick out something." called his mother. He looked around in his closet for what he would call fancy. He found a pair of black dress pants he had for special occasions and an undershirt. He couldn't find a shirt to go with it though. He looked around, and found only striped and patterned shirts. None of which go with dress pants. Finally he found a white hoodie and put it on.

"You're wearing that?" they both said. His mother looked at her watch. "Oh, no time to change. Let's just go." She said as she herded Jeff and his father out the door. They crossed the street over to Barbara and Billy's house. They knocked on the door and at it appeared that Barbara, just like his parents, way over-dressed. As they walked inside all Jeff could see were adults, no kids.

"The kids are out in the yard. Jeff, how about you go and meet some of them?" said Barbara.

Jeff walked outside to a yard full of kids. They were running around in weird cowboy costumes and shooting each other with plastic guns. He might as well be standing in a Toys R Us. Suddenly a kid came up to him and handed him a toy gun and hat.

"Hey. Wanna pway?" he said.

"Ah, no kid. I'm way too old for this stuff." The kid looked at him with that weird puppydog face.

"Pwease?" said the kid. "Fine," said Jeff. He put on the hat and started to pretend shoot at the kids. At first he thought it was totally ridiculous, but then he started to actually have fun. It might not have been super cool, but it was the first time he had done something that took his mind off of Liu. So he played with the kids for a while, until he heard a noise. A weird rolling noise. Then it hit him. Randy, Troy, and Keith all jumped over the fence on their skateboards. Jeff dropped the fake gun and ripped off the hat. Randy looked at Jeff with a burning hatred.

"Hello, Jeff, is it?" he said. "We have some unfinished business." Jeff saw his bruised nose." I think we're even. I beat the crap out of you, and you get my brother sent to JDC."

Randy got an angry look in his eyes. "Oh no, I don't go for even, I go for winning. You may have kicked our asses that one day, but not today." As he said that Randy rushed at Jeff. They both fell to the ground. Randy punched Jeff in the nose, and Jeff grabbed him by the ears and head butted him. Jeff pushed Randy off of him and both rose to their feet. Kids were screaming and parents were running out of the house. Troy and Keith both pulled guns out of their pockets.

"No one interrupts or guts will fly!" they said. Randy pulled a knife on Jeff and stabbed it into his shoulder.

Jeff screamed and fell to his knees. Randy started kicking him in the face. After three kicks Jeff grabs his foot and twists it, causing Randy to fall to the ground. Jeff stood up and walked towards the back door. Troy grabbed him.

"Need some help?" He picks Jeff up by the back of the collar and throws him through the patio door. As Jeff tries to stand he is kicked down to the ground. Randy repeatedly starts kicking Jeff, until he starts to cough up blood.

"Come on Jeff, fight me!" He picks Jeff up and throws him into the kitchen. Randy sees a bottle of vodka on the counter and smashes the glass over Jeff's head.

"Fight!" He throws Jeff back into the living room.

"Come on Jeff, look at me!" Jeff glances up, his face riddled with blood. "I was the one who got your brother sent to JDC! And now you're just gonna sit here and let him rot in there for a whole year! You should be ashamed!" Jeff starts to get up.

"Oh, finally! you stand and fight!" Jeff is now to his feet, blood and vodka on his face. Once again he gets that strange feeling, the one in which he hasn't felt for a while. "Finally. He's up!" says Randy as he runs at Jeff. That's when it happens. Something inside Jeff snaps. His psyche is destroyed, all rational thinking is gone, all he can do, is kill. He grabs Randy and pile drives him to the ground. He gets on top of him and punches him straight in the heart. The punch causes Randy's heart to stop. As Randy gasps for breath. Jeff hammers down on him. Punch after punch, blood gushes from Randy's body, until he takes one final breath, and dies.

Everyone is looking at Jeff now. The parents, the crying kids, even Troy and Keith. Although they easily break from their gaze and point their guns at Jeff. Jeff see's the guns trained on him and runs for the stairs. As he runs Troy and Keith let out fire on him, each shot missing. Jeff runs up the stairs. He hears Troy and Keith follow up behind. As they let out their final rounds of bullets Jeff ducks into the bathroom. He grabs the towel rack and rips it off the wall. Troy and Keith race in, knives ready.

Troy swings his knife at Jeff, who backs away and bangs the towel rack into Troy's face. Troy goes down hard and now all that's left is Keith. He is more agile than Troy though, and ducks when Jeff swings the towel rack. He dropped the knife and grabbed Jeff by the neck. He pushed him into the wall. A thing of bleach fell down on top of him from the top shelf. It burnt both of them and they both started to scream. Jeff wiped his eyes as best as he could. He pulled back the towel rack and swung it straight into Keith's head. As he lay there, bleeding to death, he let out an ominous smile.

"What's so funny?" asked Jeff. Keith pulled out a lighter and switched it on. "What's funny," he said, "Is that you're covered in bleach and alcohol." Jeff's eyes widened as Keith threw the lighter at him. As soon as the flame made contact with him, the flames ignited the alcohol in the vodka. While the alcohol burned him, the bleach bleached his skin. Jeff let out a terrible screech as he caught on fire. He tried to roll out the fire but it was no use, the alcohol had made him a walking inferno. He ran down the hall, and fell down the stairs. Everybody started screaming as they saw Jeff, now a man on fire, drop to the ground, nearly dead. The last thing Jeff saw was his mother and the other parents trying to extinguish the flame. That's when he passed out.

When Jeff woke he had a cast wrapped around his face. He couldn't see anything, but he felt a cast on his shoulder, and stitches all over his body. He tried to stand up, but he realized that there was some tube in his arm, and when he tried to get up it fell out, and a nurse rushed in.

"I don't think you can get out of bed just yet." she said as she put him back in his bed and re-inserted the tube. Jeff sat there, with no vision, no idea of what his surroundings were. Finally, after hours, he heard his mother.

"Honey, are you okay?" she asked. Jeff couldn't answer though, his face was covered, and he was unable to speak. "Oh honey, I have great news. After all the witnesses told the police that Randy confessed of trying to attack you, they decided to let Liu go." This made Jeff almost bolt up, stopping halfway, remembering the tube coming out of his arm. "He'll be out by tomorrow, and then you two will be able to be together again."

Jeff's mother hugs Jeff and says her goodbyes. The next couple of weeks were those where Jeff was visited by his family. Then came the day where his bandages were to be removed. His family were all there to see it, what he would look like. As the doctors unwrapped the bandages from Jeff's face everyone was on the edge of their seats. They waited until the last bandage holding the cover over his face was almost removed.

"Let's hope for the best," said the doctor. He quickly pulls the cloth; letting the rest fall from Jeff's face.

Jeff's mother screams at the sight of his face. Liu and Jeff's dad stare awe-struck at his face.

"What? What happened to my face?" Jeff said. He rushed out of bed and ran to the bathroom. He looked in the mirror and saw the cause of the distress. His face. It... it's horrible. His lips were burnt to a deep shade of red. His face was turned into a pure white color, and his hair singed from brown to black. He slowly put his hand to his face. It had a sort of leathery feel to it now. He looked back at his family then back at the mirror.

"Jeff," said Liu, "It's not that bad..."

"Not that bad?" said Jeff," It's perfect!" His family were equally surprised. Jeff started laughing uncontrollably His parents noticed that his left eye and hand were twitching.

"Uh... Jeff, are you okay?"

"Okay? I've never felt more happy! Ha ha ha ha ha haaaaaa, look at me. This face goes perfectly with me!" He couldn't stop laughing. He stroked his face feeling it. Looking at it in the mirror. What caused this? Well, you may recall that when Jeff was fighting Randy something in his mind, his sanity, snapped. Now he was left as a crazy killing machine, that is, his parents didn't know.

"Doctor," said Jeff's mom, "Is my son... alright, you know. In the head?"

"Oh yes, this behavior is typical for patients that have taken very large amounts of pain killers. If his behavior doesn't change in a few weeks, bring him back here, and we'll give him a psychological test."

"Oh thank you doctor." Jeff's mother went over to Jeff." Jeff, sweety. It's time to go."

Jeff looks away from the mirror, his face still formed into a crazy smile. "Kay mommy, ha ha haaaaaaaaaaaa!" his mother took him by the shoulder and took him to get his clothes.

"This is what came in," said the lady at the desk. Jeff's mom looked down to see the black dress pants and white hoodie her son wore. Now they were clean of blood and now stitched together. Jeff's mother led him to his room and made him put his clothes on. Then they left, not knowing that this was their final day of life.

Later that night, Jeff's mother woke to a sound coming from the bathroom. It sounded as if someone was crying. She slowly walked over to see what it was. When she looked into the bathroom she saw a horrendous sight. Jeff had taken a knife and carved a smile into his cheeks.

"Jeff, what are you doing?" asked his mother.

Jeff looked over to his mother. "I couldn't keep smiling mommy. It hurt after awhile. Now, I can smile forever. Jeff's mother noticed his eyes, ringed in black.

"Jeff, your eyes!" His eyes were seemingly never closing.

"I couldn't see my face. I got tired and my eyes started to close. I burned out the eyelids so I could forever see myself; my new face." Jeff's mother slowly started to back away, seeing that her son was going insane. "What's wrong mommy? Aren't I beautiful?

"Yes son," she said, "Yes you are. L-let me go get daddy, so he can see your face." She ran into the room and shook Jeff's dad from his sleep. "Honey, get the gun we..." She stopped as she saw Jeff in the doorway, holding a knife.

"Mommy, you lied." That's the last thing they hear as Jeff rushes them with the knife, gutting both of them.

His brother Liu woke up, startled by some noise. He didn't hear anything else, so he just shut his eyes and tried to go back to sleep. As he was on the border of slumber, he got the strangest feeling that someone was watching him. He looked up, before Jeff's hand covered his mouth. He slowly raised the knife ready to plunge it into Liu. Liu thrashed here and there trying to escape Jeff's grip.

"Shhhhhhh," Jeff said. "Just go to sleep."
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This is Helen, 14 years old. His dark circles feel as if he has never slept enough. He doesn't care about his messy black hair, since he doesn't like to put too much effort on tidying himself up; it’s unnecessary. His seat is at the back of the classroom, next to the window; he always sits there drawing quietly, as it is like everything to him. He doesn't like to socialize with people, making him a lonely one. There was a person being pushed to the floor after school.

That’s Tom, who is always the victim of bullying, not because he did anything before, it’s just the dislikes of people around him. These things happen often, and Helen is used to it. Though he does feel bad for Tom, he doesn't want to interfere, as it is quite bothersome. During recess, Judy says she’s missing her watch as she searches for it. Helen doesn't help her, since it’s none of his business.

Suddenly, someone sees something flashing in Helen’s bag. “What’s this?” Ban says, as he puts his hand into the bag, and takes out a watch that is trimmed with fake diamonds. Helen is very surprised to see it, as he does not know how it got there. “Ah! That’s my watch!” Judy receives the watch from Ban after seeing the situation. Both of them stare at Helen with a weird glare. “It’s not me,” says Helen, who is still drawing on his notebook without raising his head a bit. “Yeah right,” Judy leaves the classroom with Ban as she concludes. 

The following day, as usual, Helen sits at his table drawing. She notices that the atmosphere doesn't feel right around him; people start whispering about him, and even a few starts calling him a “Thief”. He decides not to explain for himself, as he knows that it’s useless to do so. As time passes, Helen becomes the new target or victim for people to bully; everything he does now is being exaggerated. He doesn't like it, but he doesn't resist. He keeps the feelings in his heart, keeping silent. 

Until one day, Ban came to him and snatched his notebook, with his unfinished drawings on it. “Always doing these meaningless things.” Says Ban as he tears down a few pages of drawings, tearing them into pieces, wanting to see Helen’s reaction. At this rate, the feelings that he has been holding bursts out. He punches Ban in the face, and starts the fight. Helen isn't that powerful however, so he was beaten up in no time. Other students went to see the fight, without stopping it; some people even stomped him in his face and stomach. 

Right after the bell rings, everyone stops what they're doing and went back to their seats before the teacher came. Helen returned to his seat, as if nothing happened. The teacher enters the room later on, “Oh my, Helen! What happened?” Helen has so many visible bruises on him that the teacher notices right after he enters the room. Everybody turns to look at him, waiting for him to give a response while glaring at him with a murderous look. “I fell from the stairs, Miss.” Helen replies as the glares disappear. After returning home from school, his parents also ask him what happened, and he responds with the same answer.

The blue jacket he is wearing covers all of the bruises other than those on his face. His parents believe it without doubts. Usually, when Helen’s parents ask him about how he is at school, he always says he’s fine. He even lied about making a lot of friends, living happily every day. Helen refuses to tell his parents the truth, since he doesn't want to make his parents worry about him. 

A few months later, he has gotten used to the negative comments about him, and getting hit or humiliated has been a normal event for him; he is completely immune to these things now. Who framed him in the first place? Why did the culprit do this? This doesn’t matter anymore. Nothing matters anymore now.  “Hi! You there?” Helen receives a message from an unknown user on Facebook. “Who're you?” He replies. “I’m Tom, your classmate.” Tom has never interacted with him before. This surprised him a bit. “What is it?” Helen says. “Um… are you alright?” “It’s none of your business.” Helen concludes Tom’s question. Tom types for a while before coming up with, “Listen, I know how u feel right now. You’re in the same situation as I am. I really want to help u, but I can’t… sorry.” Afterwards, Tom and Helen text each other for a long time, and Helen feels much better after telling him all the pain and feelings he has been through.

He can even joke around with Tom, often using “ : )” to show his happiness. This is the first time he thinks he has made a friend. It is a warm weather in the afternoon. “Come meet me on the roof after the first period in the afternoon. We need to talk, don’t ask me why.” texted Tom last night. Following his instructions, Helen meets Tom on the roof, waving his hand and walking towards him, saying “Hey Tom! What’s up, friend?”

“Um… I have something to say…something important…” says Tom with a serious face.

“Remember the watch thieving incident?” How could Helen forget about it? That was how he started suffering! Helen nods to show he remembers.

“I was the culprit!” Tom looked down, scared to look into his eyes.

“WHAT?!” Helen was shocked.

“I stole Judy’s watch and framed you as the culprit.”

“Why did you do this?”

“With you as the new target of victim, my life is much better.” Tom smirks.

It’s true however that, when everybody decides to bully Helen, they won’t bother Tom anymore. He’s just like an abandoned toy. For him that is totally perfect. As long as he keeps silent he will be able to live his school life safe and sound. He succeeded; the plan was outstandingly perfect. Helen grabs the collar of his shirt, and, after pushing around a bit, they ended up near the edge of the roof. Tom slips and falls from the roof. Helen instantly grabs his hand, and tries to pull him back up, but Helen does not have that much strength to do so. 

“I’m so sorry, Helen.” Tom falls. Helen closes his eyes, scared to look at what’s going to happen. He cannot imagine what will happen to one after falling from a 6 story tall building. After the policemen arrive, they have an interview with Helen. He was too horrified by the accident, however, to say even a word. Once again, Helen becomes the topic of discussion between students.

Some people thought Helen pushed Tom from the roof, but most of the others think that Tom committed suicide, and Helen failed saving him, because they saw him grabbing Tom’s hand before he fell. That night, Helen was in his room crying, shivering, and he cannot stop the guiltiness form that is growing inside of her. He needed to calm down. Suddenly, a thought flashed in his mind: “It’s not my fault that Tom died. He deserved to die!” This made him feel much better, and his guilt began to fade away, too. Helen creepily smiles, “Tom has had his punishment… I suppose it’s time for others to have theirs, isn’t it?” His cries turn into laughter in the dark.  

Helen’s classmates decide to have a party on the day of Halloween, but it’s not to celebrate Halloween, it’s just to have their friends come together to party. Of course, Helen was not invited to the party. The night before the day of Halloween Judy and Maggie were texting each other on Facebook. Both of them live in the school dorm, and Judy’s room is next to Maggie’s. 

09:03 – Judy: who’s going to come on tomorrow’s party? I’m so excited : D

09:03 – Maggie: most of our class will be there. But I texted Ban so many times, and even though all the messages I sent are read, he just never replies to me. The hells wrong with him?

09:04 – Judy: he’s probably working I guess 

09:06 – Maggie: something weird is happening…I’ve been hearing footsteps coming from my door for a long time…I think someone’s walking around the dorm

09:06 – Maggie: wait, I’ll go check (Using the hole on the door, Maggie saw something unusual…)

09:07 – Maggie: o my god!! there’s a guy outside who’s wearing a mask and a blue jacket, and he’s holding a knife. and HES ALL BLOODY!!

09:07 – Maggie: f**k! he’s knocking my door now

09:08 – Maggie: oh god oh god oh god!!!!

09:08 – Judy: just calm down, and find a weapon or something

09:08 – Judy: protect yourself!

09:09 – Maggie: She’s turning the doorknob, good thing I locked it

09:09 – Maggie: I’m scared!!

09:09 – Judy: Maggie

09:09 – Maggie: what should I do?!

09:09 – Judy: Maggie, listen

09:09 – Maggie: SAVE ME!!

09:09 – Judy: Maggie, calm down

09:09 – Judy: Maggie

09:10 – Judy: Maggie?

09:10 – Judy: u there? 

The message is shown to be read, but Judy just doesn't see Maggie’s response. Suddenly Judy hears the sound of her room door opening. The instance she turns around, she feels a terrible pain on her stomach. A bloody person who is wearing a mask and a blue jacket bursts into the room and stabs her. That night, all of the students who were in the dorm were murdered. No one knows how that killer did it. The murderer used the victims’ blood to paint on the walls of the dorm, with most of the paintings being the face “: )”.

Many of the corpses were being chopped and mashed, possibly to get more “pigments”. Helen Otis, the culprit, is still missing currently.  However, in the chat room where Judy and Maggie texted each other, a message was written that respond to Judy’s first message at 09:03:

“11:15 – Judy: don’t be excited about tomorrow : )" because there will be no tomorrow .
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